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I believe what you typed was actually very reasonable. But, what
about this? suppose you added a little content? I ain't suggesting your information is not solid., but suppose
you added a headline that grabbed people's attention? I mean Bosmasate is a little vanilla.
You should glance at Yahoo's front page and note how they write article titles to grab viewers to open the links.
You might try adding a video or a picture or two to get people excited about what you've got to say.
Just my opinion, it could make your website a little bit more interesting.
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